Crazy Dog
Washington State University
One of the objectives of this course is that you improve your skills in critical analysis by by articulating, organizing, and polishing the presentation of your insights in some kind of written presentation. You have here several options for meeting this objective which can both appeal to your own individual talents and still allow you to package brilliant scholarly textual analysis in impressive and professional ways.
You need two things at this stage: a planned presentational mode, and an idea.
The Options:
Depending on how you work best, you may want the idea first. Identify one
intriguing mythological moment in one of the works we have
examined and explore, or at least start to explore, its implications. You
are aiming for an excruciatingly focused angle on this facet of the work
and will present your analysis in either:
or
B) another kind of complete project (such as a web page or other media product) equivalent in scholarship, analysis, and grunt work to a mimimum four-page manuscript;
or
C) about four pages worth of work, with a detailing of the state of, and remaining plans towards, a larger project (a web site or ten+-page manuscript, for example) to be turned in as complete near the end of the semester.
The excruciatingly close focus should be on your perceptions rather than your evaluations or on you (e.g., "I feel that Achilles is an OK joe"). Rather than as an "opinion," think of this as your perspective or insight. Also, this is not a "review" -- drippy "appreciation" or rhapsodic praise of Homer is tiresome and dorky, so between the rough draft and the final draft, omit all those "Homer does a great job, but then that's why he's the immortal poet that he is" embarrassments. More stylistic advice is coming in class as more examples of what I never want to see again keep occurring to me.
You are encouraged to research and include secondary sources, but original insight and analysis should still dominate the entire discussion. Your final revised essay must consist of four typed, double-spaced pages containing an intriguing (not underlined) title, an original unified thesis, vigorous analytical work, no extra spaces between paragraphs, all in a clean, effective, illuminating, properly documented presentation (correctly punctuated in-text parenthetical citations of author and page, and a correctly formatted MLA-style Works Cited list). You will include a Works Cited list even if the only work on the list is the primary text. For further instruction regarding documentation, refer to the handout given with the assignment, or to the web page, or ask me ahead of time. Proofread well so that minor surface matters do not distract readers from your ideas. The grade for any manuscript lacking a Works Cited list or containing a renegade, variant, or insane documentation system will strike you as intensely disappointing.
Doing the Bloody Work:
Meeting these requirements, on time, assures you of at least a C grade
(see grading sheet). Specific quotation from the work should demonstrate
the validity of your argument. The analytical discussion inside the paper
should be persuading readers of the significance of adopting your unique
perspective on the material; it should not be a report of pointless
factoids nor a scan of tons of bilge. MLA documentation is required for
humanities papers and should be carried out correctly; so stop making me
cross out commas, p's, pg's, pgs's, and all other manner of clutter
between simply author and page in parenthetical citations of secondary
sources! Also quit with the bastardized Works Cited lists (MLA cross-bred
with numbered references, APA corruptions, etc.). Refer to a handbook
(MLA, Hacker's A Writerıs Reference, etc.) for correct
documentation, read the MLA advice on the next page of this handout,
and/or ask me ahead of time. "Are you gonna be like really strict on us
about a Works Cited and all that stuff?" Uh, yeah? And stop priding
yourself on having a jaunty identity based largely on your special lack
of skill in spelling. The presentation and appearance of your work should
be letter-perfect so that niggling surface matters do not distract your
readers from your ideas.
Cyberscholarship:
You may work alone or with someone else creating a useful resource
for current and future students of Shakespeare. Realize that this is a
scholarly project, not an advertisement or fan page. Pick an
appropriately manageable scope for the project and include all the key
ingredients that you would provide for a paper: research, analysis,
commentary, and whatever else would make this creation impressive and
valuable. And then package this in ways appropriate for a web site
(research gets registered in a Works Cited that may include hyperlinks,
for example) and for an audience consisting of future students of this
class. Do not just create a recycling dumpsite, that is, don't replicate
what's already available. Instead, be sure to offer the one thing most
lacking on the web: critical analysis -- not a full paper's worth, since
that just invites plagiarism, but some sophisticated components of
commentary.
If you choose this project because it seems easy and you think you can submit any old crap with a jpg of some Greek dolt in war gear, you are doomed and will fail most miserably. If you take up this challenge heroically and meaningfully, it will show.
Alternative Projects:
I welcome other kinds of projects that demonstrate the same objectives:
ability to carry out sophisticated research, to discover an original
purpose and focus, to write with clarity and influence your audience's
perspective. You may find a way to construct a bibliographical, filmic,
pedagogical, or popular culture related project appropriate to mythology
which will inspire enthusiasm and break new ground impressively. You may
work on a cooperative endeavor with a colleague. There are many
possibilities. Think about it.
The Deal:
You are obligated to hand in the assignment (or the textual portions of
a web page with the URL) at the beginning of the class period on the
designated due date. Truancy is, of course, no excuse (i.e., "I couldn't
get my paper in 'cause I cut class"). Fate, as we know, plays amusing
tricks. I tell you right now that Aunt Millie could drop in a flash on
"paper-due eve": it is your obligation to anticipate anything like this
in your life that could go wrong and to take preventive measures or to
develop back-up plans. You also must accept responsibility for being so
foolish as to stake your grade on a computer's or printer's reliability.
And no bitter ironies about roommates and alarm-clocks. No work submitted
means you did not meet the requirements of the course (big F); late work
will not be read but at least you will have met requirements minimally
(little F factored in). On a more positive note, I assure you that I am
happy to provide advice and help at any stage of the pre-writing,
researching, and drafting processes, short of giving you a topic and
writing the text for you. Ultimately, though, it must be completed and
turned in when due; the compressed schedule of the summer semester does
not allow for screwing around and cheesy excuses. Get to work early,
consult with me as needed, and turn in the best possible masterpiece.
Sample papers, good to excellent, are available on the web site, as are
instructions and examples for the required MLA-style documentation.